I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Fraser, this is a great review of this movie. I think the next thing to check would be your punctuation. Joseph loved this movie in the holidays too!
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