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Thursday, 11 November 2021
Writing Assessment Term 4 2021
1992
Thin air clouded the night and the moon shoon on the cars pulling into the driveway. The Halloween party had started at 7 pm it was now 8 30 pm and all the adults was settling into there drinks. Fleet-wood manor was one of the biggest house in their town. Mt Rock Hill. Kids were allowed at the party but not in the house which was unfortunate because there were many of them all bored to death.
One of them named Liam whom was quite popular out of the 26 kids suggested a game: Spotlight, every one agreed and started to work out the Boundaries and rules for the game. Boundaries had to be set because 92 acres of land is a lot to navigate. Cold air brushes though there hair as the party goes on. Shortly after round 3 there halloween costumes start to get sweaty and they regroup at the start to have a break. 24 kids catch there breath and have some water. The best out of them was mike who hunted a lot and knew how to be quiet. something felt off to mike. But they continued the game. Each round more thrilling then the last. They were up to round 10 when the clock stuck midnight. Mike was certain something was of but he couldn't put his finger on it.
“ theres only 19 of us left, the other must of gone inside. We’ll keep playing tho” Exams Liam some other kids agree. Thats what it was! Mike thinks, The house is out of bounds! Mike has to find the kids. He doesn't remember to much about the kids but were all younger was one thing he can remember.
All the adults were wasted by now so he decided to ask the “bouncers” witch were just 17 year old that were just bored and couldn't drink. They said no kids had come though this intrigued mike even more to find the them he looked around the front garden. He found nothing. He started to walk back “...help..me..” whimpers a voice. Stafan suddenly run up to mike and pulls him away giving him a fright. Mike just goes with it. Stefan had drips of blood on his jacket. Mike knows what is going on. He ripped his arm away and ran as fast as he could. He breath echoed though his head as he ran though the dense forest. he stopped to catch his breath behind one of many trees in the forest. He needed to find what happened to the kid…